Hello!! I am Catmania^^ This is the first time to start a blog for me. I am really EXCITED to post about cats. now I will introduce myself.
I have two cats. Their name is Nero And Snow. If you scroll down, you will see the picture of Nero and Snow. My blog will be mostly about cats, but sometimes it will be about a good camping place, a good book or a fun thing to do.
Also I like Taylor Swift. My favorite songs are Tik Tok and You Belong with Me. Also my hobby is to play with my friends and chat with my friends. I like GLPS winter camp. It's Fun to be with friends and I can see what KMLA looks like.
Also, if you have something curious about cats, give a comment. Then I will be happy to answer it.( EXCEPT MEDICAL PROBLEMS BECAUSE I AM NOT A VET).
If you find a mistake, please write a comment, And I will be happy to answer it.^^
Thank you.
Nero
Snow
FIX:
ReplyDeleteline 1: capitalize "This"
line 1: Take out "And" (do not begin a sentence with "And")
line 2: about me -> myself
line 3: take out "And"
line 3: their name is -> Their names are (capitalize please)
line 4: cats. But -> cats, but (do not begin a sentence with "But")
line 6: capitalize "You Belong With Me"
line 8: add "see" between "can" and "what"
line 9: comment, then -> comment. Then
line 10: IN CASE -> BECAUSE
line 11: take out "Or" and capitalize "If"
line 11: And -> and (lower case)
Please capitalize at the beginning of each sentence. Other than that, nice job!
Your cats are really cute. I also have a friend who is a cat mania. It would be interesting to know why you got to like cats so much. Anyways, nice to meet you!:)