Today, I saw Adora svitak’s speech on TED. I saw her speech and thought like Adora. I think that the word childish should be banned because childrens did many wonderful things. Also, she thinks that adults should learn from children. Instead of teaching children. Does Adults think like that? I think not because they are older and they have their pride like us. So I think not. I think it is not a problem. If we do not know it but if a younger person knows it, we have to learn. It is not an embarrassing thing to do
Now, as I said, I will tell you what wonderful things that childrens did. For example, Anne frank was a Jewish, and she wrote a diary which told her story to the world. Also, Ruby Bridges helped to end segregation in the united states. Third, Charlie Simpson helped to raise 120,000 pounds for Haiti. On his little bike. Isn't that cool? We all think that only adults can do wonderful things. But we have to think that kids can do wonderful things too. We can write a book like Adora Svitak. We can do things that I want.
Adora Svitak said have a big dream like childrens. For example, we can dream of utopia where every thing is free. But if that happens, what do you think will happen? It will cause lack of food, also chaos. But childrens do not think of reality. They just dream the world that they want to live and dream very big dreams. But dreaming big is good. I did that when I was a kid. The time that I dreamed big, everything seemed like heaven and thought I could do that someday. But, when I knew that was impossible, everyting seemed boring. But after hearing Adora’s speech, I tried to dream big like when I was young.
How do you think about Adora Svitak's speech after you watched it? do you think differently? I hope you would. I hope that we would think like Adora Svitak. I think she is right. how do you think?
How do you think about Adora Svitak's speech after you watched it? do you think differently? I hope you would. I hope that we would think like Adora Svitak. I think she is right. how do you think?
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I like your idea about dreaming big. I'm glad that Adora's speech has made you think big again. Subin, you can accomplish anything in your life.
I think it's to late to reply the comment that you've written during the camp..
Deletebut the thing is I miss all of the teachers and friend that were in the camp..
I think i have to go now^^
bye^^
I'll write soon